This is a record of my learning at Park Estate School, Auckland, New Zealand.
Hello Lorenz,Thank you for sharing about yourself. I like the way you have laid out your writing. Who is Roger the rugby player? You might need to add a last name.Mrs Krausse
Kia Ora Lorenz. Thanks for sharing this information. Could you include information about what sports you play?
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Hello Lorenz,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing about yourself. I like the way you have laid out your writing. Who is Roger the rugby player? You might need to add a last name.
Mrs Krausse
Kia Ora Lorenz. Thanks for sharing this information. Could you include information about what sports you play?
ReplyDeleteThank you for that comment room 11 pes
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